Question 1 (15 Marks)
You work as a marketing graduate for Woolworths Group in Sydney. In November last year, Woolworths Group released their Sustainability plan 2025, outlining some initiatives they wish to achieve by 2025.
As a test of your persuasive writing skills, your supervisor has asked you to write a marketing letter to your suppliers to promote the Sustainability plan and invite them to contribute to these initiatives.
Brett Steele is the Sustainability manager at CTO Ltd, address Level 9, 888 Market Street Sydney. CTO Ltd. is a produce supplier for Woolworths supermarkets. Write a letter to Mr. Brett Steele, being sure to include the features listed below:
- Block letter alignment (i.e. Justify)
- The seven basic parts of a business letter
- Sender’s name, address and contact number(s)
- Date
- Customer’s (receiver’s) name and address
- Salutation
- Subject line
- Body of the letter
- Complimentary close
- Sender’s name, signature, title
- An appropriate opening
- One or two selling points.
- The AIDA (Attention, Interest, Desire, Action) formula
- The seven basic parts of a business letter
On your answer sheet you are to write a draft letter first and then rewrite the letter in the final letter section.
Question 2 on the next page
Question 2 (15 Marks)
You work as a manager of Pizzeria Restaurant in Sydney. You received a complaint letter from Mr John and Ms Amanda Black who were customers at your restaurant last Saturday night. The customers have complained that their server (waiter or waitress) was rude, and they want a full refund of their payment.
You investigated the complaint, and you have decided that the request is unreasonable. Your investigation revealed that the customers became intoxicated during dinner and were very loud and aggressive towards each other. Your task is now to:
a. Write a plan for a bad news letter to Mr and Ms Black.
b. Discuss and prepare an opening statement which provides a neutral relevant buffer.
c. Prepare a concluding statement which avoids reference to the bad news, apology or clichés.
d. Using the “kiss, kick, kiss” formula, write a tactful and sensitive bad news letter to the Blacks denying the refund.
Before writing, read the complaint letter from the Blacks in Moodle
Your letter should include the features listed below:
- Block letter alignment (i.e. Justify)
- The seven basic parts of a business letter
- Sender’s name, address and contact number(s)
- Date
- Customer’s (receiver’s) name and address
- Salutation
- Subject line
- Body of the letter
- Complimentary close
- Sender’s name, signature, title
- The seven basic parts of a business letter
Answer sheet
Student Name | |
Student ID | |
Student Signature with date |
Question 1
Draft letter:
Final letter
Question 2
- Write a plan for a ‘bad news’ letter to Mr and Ms Black.
- Discuss and prepare an opening statement which provides a neutral relevant buffer.
- Prepare a concluding statement which avoids reference to the bad news, apology or clichés.
- Using the “kiss, kick, kiss” formula, write a tactful and sensitive “bad news” letter to the Blacks denying the refund.
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